mam napisać tzw, ripostę na artykuł wydany w gazecie , który wypisuje same kłamstwa w związku z przedstawieniem. List napisałam ale bardzo porszę osprawdzenie listu , czy jest dobrze napisany .

Dear Sir
I am writing with regard to your recent review of outdoor theatre.
I feel I have to express my disagreement with serval of your comments as follows.
Firstly , the tickets were for too expensive for such a performances as this.
Writer it was evidently ill informed.
I am opposed to your comment regarding this performance .
This is not true , that the presentation was crowded audience of all ages.
Is not was special ofers for senior citizens or young children.
In addition , it rained twice which resulted in shortening of two performances , and could not see the stage from the sides .
In conclusion I think that this performance was unsuccessful. I hope , therefore , that you will print this letter together with apology to the people and myself.
Yours faithfully
xxx.

Sir (drogi tu nie pasuje)
I am writing with regard to your recent review of outdoor theatre.
I need (czuję, że muszę trochę śmiesznie brzmi) to express my disagreement with several(chyba o to chodziło?) of your comments as follows.
Firstly , the tickets were (po co to for?) too expensive for performances like this/such performances (wybierz jedno albo drugie bo się powtórzyłeś)

Writer it was evidently ill informed. (możesz powiedzieć o co chodzi w tym zdaniu?)

I am opposed to your comment regarding this performance .
This is not true , that the presentation was crowded audience of all ages.

Is not was special ofers for senior citizens or young children. (o co tu chodzi? bo można je zmienić na 2 sposoby)

In addition , it rained twice which resulted in shortening of two performances , and could not see the stage from the sides (też nie bardzo rozumiem)

In conclusion I think that this performance was unsuccessful (to w końcu artykul był nieudany czy przedstawienie?). I hope , therefore , that you will print this letter together with apology for the people and myself.

Sincerely (Yours faithfully wydaje mi się mniej oficjalne)
xxx.

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